Dear reader
First, I would love to say the whole paper is great, but 1 I’m not suppose to do that. So, on a scale of one to four (four meaning best) I rate part of this essay a 2 (not good). I can’t say it’s all great. So I will only call attention to the introduction and conclusion. I have a hook in my intro- something to make you want to read my paper. I have a good conclusion to wrap up of the whole paper. So I scored the conclusions and intro a four. In addition, my transitions are on point. I used “first of all, secondly, finally, and in conclusion.”
In other words, this paper still requires work, but the intro and conclusion ROCK!
Julia fusco
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